I love the idea and other 2 parts of this trilogy are stunning! These pieces of art show, how truly you can express yourself.
But...I don't know if it's just me...I feel like something's wrong with this one when I look at it. I can't tell what is it, but it seems like there is kind of a mistake and I don't know where. Was it meant to be like that?
Want to post a constructive critique? There's a field under this deviation where you can do it and write exactly what is wrong here. Otherwise If you "feel something's wrong" it's your own problem, baby. That's all I can say.
I am not really into paying only to write a critique in box that is created to do so. Let's call my thoughts as a 'comment' and now it seems to be in a right place. That is what comment boxes are for - to say what people feel about an art, not only to copy and paste 'wow it's great' comments. Proportions in the picture are not realistic and this makes a wrong impression at a first glance.